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Akimov needs good manners. Composition on the topic: why good manners are needed

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MAOU Galchinskaya secondary school

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Topic: "How to prepare for an essay-reasoning"

Completed by: Russian language teacher

and literature

Zaitseva S.S.

Domodedovo 2012

Introduction.

Stages of work on an essay - reasoning.

Working with text when writing an essay-reasoning.

Conclusion.

Bibliography.

Introduction.

Subject: How to prepare for essay writing.

Relevance: The work contains theoretical information and practical recommendations for preparing for the task with a detailed answer of part C of the unified state exam in the Russian language (composing - reasoning). A detailed analysis of the submitted student work will identify and systematize problem areas in preparing students for Part C.

Target: To form the knowledge, skills and abilities necessary for the student to successfully pass the exam.

An object: Educational and methodological aids for preparing for writing-reasoning.

Hypothesis: The task of part C is a task with a detailed answer and is an essay-reasoning based on the read text. It is this task that checks the state of practical skills of graduates (their command of monologue speech, the ability to argue their point of view) and the general state of their culture, which requires some preparation from them.

Research objectives:

1.study of educational and methodological material to prepare for writing-reasoning;

2. study of the stages of work on an essay-reasoning;

3. study of language analysis of the source text;

4. study of analysis and evaluation of essay-reasoning.

Theoretical significance:This work will allow graduates to systematize knowledge and skills in preparation for writing-reasoning.

Practical significance:This work will be of interest not only to the teacher, but also to high school students and their parents.

Methods: 1) theoretical method;

2) method of analysis;

3) practical method.

Stages of work on an essay-reasoning.

The methods of formation and development of the main idea of ​​the text depend on the type of speech used in it. Traditionally, there are three main semantic types of speech: narration, description, reasoning.

Reasoning - this is a verbal presentation, explanation, confirmation of any thought. The task of reasoning is to consider the most important properties of objects, phenomena and establish cause-and-effect relationships between them.

The text - reasoning should consist of three parts:

Thesis (what is being proved or explained; the main idea requiring proof or explanation);

Evidence (arguments, arguments, justification, explanation, i.e. judgments that confirm the truth of the thesis);

Conclusion

A similar structure takes place in full reasoning; in the abbreviated argument, or the conclusion is omitted; or a thesis, because they are close in content (a conclusion is a proven thesis; a conclusion expands the meaning of the thesis).

Reasoning differs from description and narration primarily in more extended complex sentences (with isolated phrases, various types of allied and non-union connections) and the abstract nature of vocabulary, i.e. words denoting abstract concepts (words denoting specific objects and phenomena predominate in the narrative):

Where to start talking about Russia? For me, a Russian, this is not easy: the big is seen from a distance.

Russia is big. Thirty Frances or almost two Chinas can be placed on its territory. I remember a school teacher saying: the sun needs ten hours to get from the Bering Strait to Moscow.

Maybe start the conversation with what Russia is different? This is the treeless, through and through frozen tundra in the Far North, and the dense taiga in Siberia; these are the mountains of the Urals and Transbaikalia, and the expanse of wheat fields of the Don and Kuban; these are millionaire cities, and tiny villages that have never heard a locomotive whistle (According to B. Korotkov).

Almost all texts with other types of speech (narration, description) provide material for writing an essay-reasoning. In order to write an essay of this kind on different types of texts, you must first highlight the main idea that the author is trying to convey to the reader.

Remember! Types of speech can be distinguished by questions: the question is posed to the narrative what happened ?, to the description - what ?, to reasoning - why?

The main idea of ​​the text-narrative, the text-description is carried out by the author for a specific purpose, therefore, the element of causality is undoubtedly present in these texts as well.

Text-Narrative

Lebedinsky fidelity

The sun rose higher and higher over the bay, blotting out the shadows.

Jaeger said:

“The snow-white swan fell into the reeds, not yet understanding what happened to him, tried to fly into the blue sky. (4) His right wing drooped lifelessly. (5) The poacher deprived the bird of its most expensive flight. (6) The swan lay motionless in the reeds. (7) His girlfriend, white swan , worried. (8) The bird made an alarming, guttural cry. (9) The flock has already left the peninsula and flew further north. (10) I didn’t want to fall behind, but you can’t leave a friend in trouble either. (11) And then she approached, began carefully picking his feathers.

(12) I sailed into the bay early in the morning. (13) The swan took off and began to circle anxiously. (14) I decided to examine the reeds. (15) Here I found a downed bird. (16) Left the swan in a safe place, brought medicine and bandaged the wounded wing. (17) The next day I reappeared on a small island. (18) Walked around him, made sure that there were no predators. (19) “What is your name? thought. “From now on, the swan will be Lotus, and the swan will be Lily.”

(20) The whole month I sailed to the swan island. (21) The Lotus cheered up and greeted me with a guttural cry. (22) One day, when he came to a hut, he saw: an egg was lying in an arranged nest. (23) The swan swam up to my boat and took food from my hands. (24) I knew that the Lotus would never have to fly: the wing was broken.

(25) Autumn has come. (26) Two more young swans swam in the place with the Lotus and the Lily. (27) And at this time the departure of birds began. (28) Farewell voices were heard in the sky all night. (29) Lily listened anxiously to them.

(30) Before my eyes, the children of Lotus and Lily took off, joined the flock and flew to distant lands. (31) The swan was worried, but soon swam up to the Lotus and began to preen his feathers. (32) Her whole appearance said: “Let our children fly away to spend the winter in warm lands. And we're doing well here."

(33) And soon a swan song reached me. (34) The handsome Lotus sang it. (35) No, it was not a farewell song - a hymn to life!

(K. Khromov)

The main idea allows you to ask why? “Why does the author think that the Lotus song is not a farewell song, but a hymn to life. This question may form the basisthesis (1) Proof (2)is a description of what happened to Lotus and how his faithful friend helped him in misfortune.

Conclusion (3) can be equal to the thesis.

Description text

First frost.

The night passed under a large clear moon, and by morning the first frost fell.

Everything was gray, but the puddles did not freeze. (3) When the sun appeared and warmed up, the trees and grass were covered with such strong dew, the fir branches looked out of the dark forest with such luminous patterns that the diamonds of all our land would not be enough for this decoration.

(4) The queen, pine, sparkling from top to bottom, was especially good. (5) Joy jumped in my chest like a young dog.

(M. Prishvin)

The main idea of ​​the text allows you to ask the question why? “Why did the first frosty day arouse such stormy joy in the author’s chest?” This question may form the basis thesis. Proofserves as a description of the picture of a frosty winter day. Conclusion may be equal thesis.

Text - reasoning

(1) What is beauty? (2) Do we perceive beauty in the same way? (3) Is it possible to appreciate beauty? (4) Do ideas about beauty change over time?

(5) Often we call beautiful what corresponds to the norms and ideals of our time. (6) Each era has its own ideals and fashion. (7) But there is beauty that is imperishable, enduring, to which humanity will necessarily return. (8) We will never cease to be pleased with the proportions of the Parthenon, the harmony and unity with nature of the Church of the Intercession on the Nerl ... (9) I am upset every time I hear the phrase: “There are no comrades for the taste and color ...” (10) Just the opposite - you are surprised how many people value beauty in the same way.

The main idea can form the basis thesis : genuine beauty is perceived equally.Proofthe author's reasoning about the incorruptibility of true beauty, despite many factors associated with ideals and fashion, can serve.

Methods of connection of parts of reasoning.

In reasoning, a question is often used to move from a thesis to a proof. why?, a particle, after all, and such constructions as: and that's why; this can be proved as follows; let's prove it; this is easy to verify; and this is understandable.

The conclusion is associated with the proof most often through introductory words: so, in this way, etc., words and combinations; therefore, that's why...; sentences like: Summarize all of the above. Let's summarize. From all that has been said above, it follows that, etc.

Many other introductory words and combinations can also indicate the connection and sequence of thoughts. For example, firstly, secondly, finally, for example, let's say, we will offer, so, therefore, therefore, etc.

Another combination of parts of the argument is also possible: without conjunctions, without introductory words, only in meaning.

Ways of linking sentences in the text.

When constructing a proof, one should remember that each sentence must be related to the previous one. Only in this case can we talk about the logic and consistency of reasoning. This connection of proposals can be carried out using

Lexical repetition

personal pronoun

Synonym

Antonyma

Opposing union

Particles

Adverbs

demonstrative pronoun

Pronouns with a preposition

possessive pronoun

Single root words. There are cases when not one means of communication is used, but several.

WORKING WITH THE TEXT WHEN WRITING AN ESSAY-REASONING.

Text.

(1) Whether good manners are needed. (2) The latest machines could calculate what the sum of bad temper, irritability, generated by the rude and even unkind behavior of people, could cost the country, and give us sensational figures. (3) A person who feels calm and comfortable in the company of his fellow citizens is many times more efficient and enterprising than the one who must always, every minute, be on the alert to prevent undeserved insult, rudeness and rudeness. (4) In my opinion, good manners are a manifestation of inner delicacy and culture, a necessary attribute of a healthy lifestyle.

(5) But often the best people offend their loved ones. (6) And this usually happens without any malicious intent, without the intention to offend, humiliate, offend, but simply - through negligence, thoughtlessness, inattention. (7) These good people, often busy with big and important things, did not find time to think over the form of their behavior, did not work out those simple and useful rules with which you can improve the mood of the whole team, make life more pleasant, nerves healthier.

(8) Two very important conclusions should be drawn by every young person. (9) First: a kind attitude towards others does not require large expenses, does not exhaust a person. (10) This is in the full sense of the word a free application to life, and later, when it becomes a habit, it is already done automatically and does not lose its beneficial effect. (11) Second: a person who has learned to treat his neighbors well not only brings joy to them, but also receives tremendous pleasure from such behavior.

(12) Therefore, good manners and well-trained behavior are not only a great contribution of a person to society. (13) This deposit brings to the depositor the most valuable income in the world - a good mood and an optimistic mood.

(According to N. Akimov)

In order to write an essay-reasoning on this text, you need to do the following work:

See how this idea is expressed in the text. Pay special attention to those sentences where it is most clearly expressed. In our text, these are sentences (3), (4), (11), (12), (13);

They should be read again to formulate a thesis, which may sound something like this:“Good manners need to be acquired not only in order to pass for a well-mannered person. N. Akimov claims that “correctly developed behavior” improves the life of both an individual and the whole society.”

As evidence, you can rely on the already listed proposals (see above):"And that's why. Firstly, according to N. Akimov, a person living in a team of well-mannered people feels much more efficient, because he does not have to waste time repelling aggression from his colleagues. Secondly, good manners and good manners promote a healthy lifestyle. Thirdly, a person who has good manners brings joy not only to those around him. He himself gets great pleasure from this, being in a good mood.

Conclusion to the first part of the essay.A person lives in society, therefore, knowledge of etiquette is the contribution that undoubtedly improves both the life of one person and society as a whole.

To convey the main idea and convey it to the readerthe author uses such expressive means as synonyms and gradation. Synonyms ("And this usually happenswithout any intention, without intention to offend, humiliate, offend, but it’s so simple - due to oversight, thoughtlessness, inattention ”) is used by the author for greater expression, as they do not allow a more complete definition of the properties and nature of the subject of the narrative. All synonyms are built on the principle of ascending gradation (“... in order to prevent undeserved insult, rudeness and rudeness ”), which allows the author to show a negative attitude towards the consequences associated with ignorance or ignorance of etiquette.

Next, you should write your agreement / disagreement with the author, which can be expressed as follows:I agree (agree) with the author's opinion that knowledge of etiquette is of social importance. It is unpleasant if they try to offend you, if they talk to you rudely. The result is a ruined mood, a ruined day. And this does not contribute to a healthy lifestyle.

Read the lines in italics - and you will see an exemplary essay-reasoning on a given text that meets the criteria for the exam.

Conclusion.

The most important condition for the successful writing of an essay-reasoning based on the text read is the understanding of the source text, an adequate perception of its topic, the problems raised by the author, and the author's position.

Before writing your own text, clarify your intention, your attitude to the position of the author of the text. If you share this position, pick up examples - evidence in defense of the chosen position. If not, then arguments that will allow you to object to the author.

Think over the composition and speech design of your essay. Remember that you are writing an essay, not a summary. Your text should be an interpretation of the issues raised in the original text, their interpretation. Author's thoughts can be briefly conveyed by you, paraphrased, quoted, indicated by reference to sentence numbers in the text, or indicated when presenting your own point of view. Arguing his own attitude (own position), the writer must not only agree or disagree with the author of the source text, but also convincingly argue his opinion.

When conveying the author's position on a particular issue, try not to distort the original information, follow the course of the author's thought and not go beyond the issue under discussion. It is impossible to replace the facts cited by the author with others - this will be considered the most gross mistake.

When working on an essay, remember that poor speech, that is, speech limited by the volume of the dictionary, inaccurate word usage, syntactic monotony, reduces the impression of the work and may lead to a decrease in the mark for it. Use a variety of syntactic constructions, try to use words in accordance with their meaning and lexical compatibility.

List of used literature

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Golub I.B., Rosenthal D.E. Entertaining style. M., 1988; They are. A book about good speech. M., 1997

Golub I.B. Grammatical style of the modern Russian language. M., 1987

Gorbanevsky M.V., Karaulov Yu.N., Shaklein V.M. Don't speak in harsh language. M., 1999. S. 171-174.

Gorbachevich K.S. Norms of the modern Russian literary language. M., 1989.

Graudina L.K. Issues of normalization of the Russian language. Grammar and variants.

Ippolitova N.A. Culture of Russian speech. M., Flinta, 2004.

Kapinos V.I. , Puchkova L.I., Tsybulko I.P., Gosteva Yu.N. Guidelines for evaluating tasks with a detailed answer: Russian language. - M .: "Unicum-Center", 2004, 2005.

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Kozhina M.N. Stylistics of the Russian language. 3rd edition. M., 1993.

The culture of Russian speech and the effectiveness of communication. M., 1996

Rosenthal D.E. A culture of speech. M., 1960; He is. Practical stylistics of the Russian language. M., 1985.

Rosenthal D.E. Handbook of Spelling and Literary Editing. M., 1997.

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Russian language of the late twentieth century. M., 1996.

Senkevich M.P. Culture of radio and television speech, M., 1987.

Skovorodnikov A.P. On the state of speech culture in the Russian mass media (the experience of describing typical violations of literary and linguistic norms) // Theoretical and applied aspects of speech communication. Scientific method. Bull. No. 3. Krasnoyarsk, 1998.


There are many books on "good manners". These books explain how to behave in society, at a party and at home, with older and younger, how to speak and how to dress. But people usually draw little from these books. This happens, I think, because good manners books rarely explain what good manners are for. There are many books on good manners. But people tend to learn little from these books, because they rarely explain why good manners are needed.


What is the basis of the guide to acquiring good manners? Is it just a collection of "recipes" for behavior? At the heart of all good manners is one concern - that a person does not interfere with a person, that everyone feels good together. Why do we need "recipes" of behavior? At the heart of all good manners lies one concern - that a person does not interfere with a person.


We must be able not to interfere with each other. So no need to make noise. Therefore, there is no need to champ, loudly put the fork on the plate, speak loudly at dinner. You don't have to talk with your mouth full so that the neighbors don't have fears. And do not put your elbows on the table - again, so as not to interfere with your neighbor. It is necessary to be neatly dressed because respect for others is reflected in this: you should not be disgusting to look at.




As you can see, there is a deep meaning in the so-called good manners. And it is necessary to educate in oneself not so much manners as what is expressed in them - a careful attitude towards people, towards nature. We must not remember hundreds of rules, but remember one thing - the need for a respectful attitude towards others. And then the manners will come to you, the memory will come to the rules of good behavior, the desire and ability to apply them.




There are many books on good manners. But people tend to learn little from these books, because they rarely explain why good manners are needed. Why do we need "recipes" of behavior? At the heart of all good manners lies one concern - that a person does not interfere with a person. In order to learn not to interfere with each other, you do not need to make noise, champ, speak loudly at dinner, put your elbows on the table; you have to be neatly dressed. There is a deep meaning in good manners - respect for people and nature. We must not remember hundreds of rules, but remember one thing - the need for a respectful attitude towards others. Then the desire and ability to apply the rules of good behavior will come to you.




EXCLUSION of repetitions; one or more of the synonyms; individual members of the proposal, some homogeneous members of the proposal; clarifying and explanatory constructions; introductory words (some, not all!); sentence fragment; one or more sentences: omission of sentences containing secondary facts; skipping sentences with descriptions and reasoning; reduction of a complex sentence due to a less essential part.




SIMPLIFICATION merging several sentences into one; replacing a sentence or part of it with a demonstrative pronoun; replacing a complex sentence with a simple one / breaking down a complex sentence into abbreviated simple ones; replacement of a fragment of a sentence with a synonymous expression: translation of direct speech into indirect; the formation of a complex (or simple with homogeneous members) sentence by merging two adjacent sentences that tell about the same subject of speech.




EXCEPTION: supply level Reduction of individual supply terms Placed in an absorption box, the coal absorbed the poisonous gas and released already clean breathable air. Placed in an absorption box, the coal absorbed the poisonous gas and let out clean air.




Breaking down a complex sentence into abbreviated simple ones Let's bow to him, the man who grew bread, and let's be honest and conscientious before his great feat, great and modest at the same time; before leaving the bakery with a loaf or a brick of warm bread, let us remember again and again with reverent heartfelt participation the hands that sowed and grew this bread. Let us bow to the man who grew bread, and let us be conscientious before his great and modest feat. Before leaving the bakery with a brick of warm bread, let us remember with heartfelt participation the hands that grew this bread.


EXCEPTION: sentence level Elliptation/grammatical incompleteness Russian expanses are wide. Coal, gold and copper are hidden in the depths. In one hand he held a fishing rod, and in the other he held a cuckoo with a fish. Russian expanses are wide. In the bowels - coal, gold and copper. In one hand he held a fishing rod, and in the other - a cuckoo with a fish.




EXCEPTION: microtopic level Skipping sentences containing minor facts It happens that on a frosty day, tits fly into open windows. Or in the canopy of houses. I tamed the tits that flew into my little house, and they quickly settled down in it. It happens that on a frosty day, tits fly into open windows. I tamed the tits that flew into my little house, and they quickly settled down in it.


GENERALIZATION OF SPECIFIC, SINGLE PHENOMENA SUPPLY LEVEL Geologists, engineers, technicians, workers set off to storm the taiga in order to wrest from it the cherished secret of the Siberian platform - to find a diamond deposit and provide industry with them. People moved to storm the taiga in order to wrest from it the cherished secret of the Siberian platform - to find a diamond deposit and provide industry with them.


Not so long ago, scientists believed that success in life is directly related to our intellectual abilities. The more a person knows and knows how, the more likely it is that he will achieve a lot in life. However, it turns out, according to modern scientists, a head filled with knowledge is not yet a salvation from serious life failures and failures. The intellectual abilities and skills necessary for subsequent work are just the foundation, the foundation. On this foundation, the building of professional success can only be built if a person has certain personal qualities. And one of these most important qualities is the ability to understand others, feel their mood, empathize with them. Psychologists have come to the conclusion that the perception of art, in particular, can help develop this ability. A person who enjoys picturesque or sculptural images, feels the beauty of a verse or melody, feels the rhythm of a pattern - such a person is capable of emotional experience necessary for life. Through empathy, a person feels his involvement in those who live next to him, participates in what is happening around him. Therefore, having the ability to understand, feel and empathize, a person will be able to maintain harmonious relations with the world, which means he will be able to succeed in this world.


Not so long ago it was believed that success in life directly depends on our intellectual abilities, knowledge and skills. Now scientists are coming to the conclusion that intellectual baggage is a necessary but not sufficient condition for success. To succeed, a person, among other things, must have the ability to understand others, feel their mood, empathize with them. This ability can be developed, in particular, through the perception of art. A person capable of emotional experience will be able to maintain harmonious relations with the world, which means he will be able to succeed in it.

We all want to have many friends, to please the people around us, to make a good impression on them. And for this it is not at all the main thing to have external beauty, to be beautifully and fashionably dressed. Just as the ability to tell a lot of interesting stories, anecdotes, etc. is not the main thing. The art of pleasing people is laid down somewhere inside us and it is developed over the years and hard work. “Treat others the way you would like others to treat you,” say wise people. And this is the basic rule that everyone who wants to be a welcome guest in any company, in any home should follow.

The ability to treat people kindly plays, of course, a very important role in the life of every person. But in the art of communication, the ability to behave correctly is very important. “Virtue itself can offend if it is combined with repulsive manners,” N.V. Shelgunov argued. You can not have a great mind, not have some unique abilities, not be very sociable, not distinguished by special beauty, but at the same time evoke the sympathy of others. F. Chesterfield said: “If you find that you are imperceptibly imbued with sympathy for a person who has neither high merits nor any outstanding talents, think about it and follow what exactly this person made such a good impression on you, and you will see that this is pleasantness of manners, courtesy and the ability to behave. Usually people like those who show sincere attention to them, know how to listen, understand, sympathize or rejoice with them. Each of us experiences such a need for the attention of others. Therefore, if you want to be loved, to be treated with attention, love, appreciate those around you, be kind to them, show sincere participation in their troubles and joys. But always observe the measure, because in the life of every person there are moments when he wants to be left alone so that he does not impose his too active attention on him. The ability to discern, to understand where the border between attention and obsession lies, a sense of tact is one of the main features of a polite person.

Probably, each of us has noticed more than once that the same actions under different circumstances, in different conditions, in relation to different people can look and be perceived in completely different ways. What is accepted and even welcomed in one case may well become a subject of condemnation in another. But there are general rules of good education, which always and for all occasions remain unchanged. This, for example, such as a benevolent attitude towards all people without exception. You can never deliberately form a negative opinion about a person, think that there is more bad in him than good. All people are different - and we, too, may not like someone at first sight. It is also impossible to burden those around you with your own concerns, to shift part of your work onto others - they have their own needs, duties, deeds, and this must be constantly remembered. Therefore, one should also not take away a lot of time from a person for communication without asking in advance whether we are tearing him away from important matters or even just from rest. The help rendered to you should be accepted with gratitude, but not to demand or expect constant "good deeds" from others. It is considered bad manners to flaunt one's merits. No matter how proud you are of your achievements, talents, knowledge, external data, etc., you should never brag about them to others. If these advantages are real, they will definitely be noticed. And modesty and the ability to remain silent about one's own merits will multiply these virtues many times over. After all, it is not for nothing that they say that modesty adorns a person. That is why you should not often talk about yourself, about deeds, events, incidents that are important only for yourself, because they may be uninteresting and unimportant for others. If a person wants you to share your joy or grief with him, if he decides to take part in your fate, then he will definitely say this himself or make it clear in some other way. Otherwise, you need to limit yourself to mentioning what worries you or what happened in your life. Conversely, you should never try too hard to get the other person to talk about what they don't want to talk about. Not everyone feels the need to discuss their personal affairs with strangers - even with their best friends. This must be remembered constantly. You can’t try to give advice to others all the time - especially in the presence of other people. If someone really cares about your opinion, they will ask for it.

If you think that your advice will be useful, express it unobtrusively, once and in private. Because any remark said in a circle of people can be perceived as a reproach. To refuse a request to another is bad. But after all, in the life of each of us there are circumstances when, for objective reasons, we cannot give consent. In these cases, the refusal must be polite and accompanied by a sincere explanation of the reasons. This list could go on for quite some time. The art of etiquette is a whole science that must be approached with all seriousness and responsibility.

Of course, many of us are familiar with the elementary rules of behavior in society. But not everyone knows how to use them - either from reluctance, or from an inability to correctly assess the situation, or simply because of their own egoism. After all, the main thing in the art of communicating with people is attention to them, and many of us first of all think about ourselves. And then they are offended and wonder why others do not want to communicate with them. N. V. Shelgunov wrote: “Many are impolite, not because they want to be like that, but because they don’t know how to do better; many seem cruel, focused and proud, while, in fact, they are only shy. Of course, shyness is not a vice. But people who are truly valued in society are open, ready to express their opinions, listen to others - to communicate. A shy person seeks to avoid awkward situations, is afraid to appear not in the best light, to be wrong. We can say that in this way he tries to protect himself from minor inconveniences. But T. Jefferson argued: "Politeness is the habit of sacrificing minor conveniences." R. Emerson wrote about the same: “Good manners consist of small self-sacrifices.” So, if you want people to like you, you need to be able to overcome your shyness and be open in communication.

There is an opinion that politeness is only external, ostentatious. “There is no good in your soul - at least acquire a good look,” says an Indian proverb. But I cannot agree with this. It seems to me that good manners cannot be taught to an evil, selfish, rude, conceited, arrogant, envious person. All these shortcomings will certainly manifest themselves, and a false, sophisticated courtesy, not coming from the heart, can only alienate others from such a person. After all, good manners are designed to decorate, emphasize our virtues, and not cover up our shortcomings with a mask of decency.

“The rules of conduct are a translation of virtue into a common language,” F. Bacon argued. “Virtue and wisdom without knowledge of the rules of conduct are like foreign languages, because they are usually not understood in such a case.” Therefore, learn good manners so that others understand you, see and appreciate your virtues, feel sincere sympathy for you!

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Purpose: preparing students for the GIA, the Unified State Examination.

Learning how to compress text.

In science, there are three ways to compress text:

  1. Exception,
  2. generalization,
  3. Simplification.

I. Exception details, details, specific examples, numerical data, author's explanations, digressions, etc.

The object of compression, reduction during abstracting can be not only the information itself, but also the language form of its presentation. In other words, without shortening the thought, you can shorten its record.

II. Generalization several homogeneous small (private, single) questions. In this case, the student must first find these homogeneous particular facts in the text, isolate the general in them, and then select the linguistic form of their generalized transmission, that is, reformulate the thought in their own words.

III. Simplify (Simplify the content of a paragraph of text; transform complex sentences into simple ones.)

The choice of one or another compression method depends on the characteristics of a particular text.

What tasks and exercises, in my opinion, contribute to the development of the skills of collapsing secondary information and highlighting the main one, as well as its reformulation in a generalized form?

Forms of work:

  1. Highlight key words in the sentence.
  2. Transform a complex sentence into a simple one, keeping its essence.
  3. Compose a key phrase to the paragraph of the read text, which would be the key to understanding it.
  4. Summarize the content of the sentence, paragraph, text.
  5. Read the sentences in which the detailing words are underlined, first completely, and then without them, compare their meaning.
  6. Underline words in the text that can be omitted without compromising the content.
  7. Highlight the meaningful parts of the text. Determine the main idea for each section. Title each section. State the main idea of ​​the entire text.
  8. Do the following with text:
    a) make a plan for it;
    b) select the most essential information in the text and write it down in accordance with the plan.

Open lesson in 6th grade.

Subject: Text. Text compression techniques. Preparing for a summary

The purpose of the lesson:

  1. compose an algorithm for writing a concise presentation;
  2. to continue work on the formation of skills in text analysis, highlighting the main and secondary information in the text;
  3. prepare students for writing a concise presentation;
  4. moral education of students (why do we need good manners?)

Equipment:

  1. Didactic material (text presentation - 1 copy for each student)
  2. Explanatory Dictionary of S. Ozhegov.
  3. Memo "Techniques for compressing text."

During the classes

1. The word of the teacher.

Today we will prepare to write a concise summary.

How do you understand this term? (The content of the text is reproduced briefly, generally. Everything without which the text remains clear and solid is excluded.)

We continue our conversation on the key concepts without which this work cannot be done. You have probably already guessed what concepts we are talking about.

Name them. (Text, micro-theme, main idea, plan)

What is text? (These are two or more sentences related in meaning, as well as with the help of linguistic means and arranged in a certain sequence.)

Name the main features of the text. (Connectedness, unity, integrity, completeness.)

What is a microtheme? (This is what is said in a certain section of the text.)

2. Explanation of new material.

  1. What do you know about the author of this text?
  2. Reading the text of Academician D.I. Likhachev.
  3. Text analysis.

- What is this text about? Determine its main idea. (Why good manners?)

How can you name it? (Why good manners?)

What style is this text? Prove your opinion.

What type of speech is this text? Prove (reasoning).

We must reproduce the content of this text concisely.

Here are the reminders for you: Text compression techniques:

  1. Exception(everything without which the text remains clear and solid is excluded);
  2. Generalization(reformulate the idea in your own words);
  3. Simplification(elimination of repetitions, replacement of complex syntactic constructions with simple ones).

Read the 1st paragraph of the text.

What micro-theme can be identified in it? (Why good manners are needed.) Is this paragraph important to the disclosure of the topic?

What text compression technique can be used. Underline key words.

How can you title the 1st paragraph of the plan?

1. Why do we need good manners?

Look at the 2nd, 3rd paragraphs.

Can they be combined? Why? (General micro-topic.) Underline key words.

What text compression technique can be used. (Generalization.)

How can you title the 2nd paragraph of the plan?

2. What underlies the “recipes” of behavior?

Reading the 4th paragraph Review it, highlight key words, underline with a pencil.

What micro-theme can we single out. What text compression method can we use? (Simplification.). How are the sentences in this paragraph related? (Chain connection, lexical repetition can be removed.) How can you title point 3 of the plan?

3. We must be able not to interfere with each other:

a) don't make noise
b) slurp
c) speak loudly at the table
d) put your elbows on the table

Look through the 5th, 6th paragraphs. Can we combine them? (Yes, a common micro-theme.) What text compression technique can we use? (Combination of exclusion and generalization.) How can you title the 4th paragraph of the plan?

4. The most important rule to remember.

Likhachev puts his appeal to young people in the form of a letter, the text is inviting, it is convincing, emotional. The means of the language that are typical for journalistic speech are used: rhetorical questions (they do not imply an answer, their task is to draw our attention to the problem under discussion), lexical repetitions, inversion (it is necessary to be neatly dressed because).

Read the condensed version of the text. What conclusion can you draw for yourself?

Express your attitude to the problem raised in the text.

How to avoid speech repetitions?

- Good manners.
- Recipes for behavior.
- Rules of good behavior.

ETIQUETTE, (work with a dictionary).

The next stage of work. Spelling and punctuation analysis of the text.

  1. What spellings can cause problems?
  2. Punctograms?

(Books on good manners seldom explain why good manners are necessary. Being neatly dressed is necessary because it shows respect for others.)

Summary of the lesson. What is a summary? What text compression techniques can you use?

On house: write a summary.

😉 Greetings to my regular and new readers! Friends, why do we need good manners in our time? Let's try to figure it out.

What is good manners

Good manners are the basis of the behavior of a well-mannered person in society. The way of dealing with other people, the expressions used in speech, tone, intonation, gait, gestures and facial expressions. All this is called manners.

At the heart of all good manners is the concern that the person does not interfere with the person. To make everyone feel good together. We must be able not to interfere with each other. Don't think that good manners are superficial. Your behavior reveals your essence.

“Everything should be beautiful in a person: the face, and clothes, and the soul, and thoughts” A.P. Chekhov

It is necessary to educate in oneself not so much manners as what is expressed in them. This is a careful attitude to the world, to society, to nature, to animals and birds. We must not remember hundreds of rules, but remember one thing - the need for a respectful attitude towards the people around you.

“Behavior should be sublime, but not bizarre. Thoughts should be subtle, but not petty. The character should be balanced, but not weak-willed. Manners should be polite, but not cutesy."

Proverbs

  • Good manners cost nothing.
  • Kindness opens all doors.
  • Do not exalt yourself, do not humiliate others.
  • A good word to a man is like rain in a drought.
  • Accuracy - the politeness of kings.
  • Bowing down, the head will not break off.
  • A kind word and a cat is pleased.
  • Kind silence is better than bad grumbling.
  • Keep your tongue on a string.

Love your neighbor as yourself

The first and most important rule of behavior in society is courtesy, kindness and consideration for others. This rule never changes.

The source of this rule is the Bible: "Love your neighbor as yourself." Knowing how to behave properly is only part of having good manners. Doing them is what matters.

One of the basic principles of modern life is the maintenance of normal relations between people. The desire to avoid conflicts. But in life we ​​often have to deal with rudeness, harshness, disrespect for the personality of another person.

The society has always appreciated and appreciate the modesty and restraint of a person. The ability to control your actions. Communicate carefully and tactfully with other people.

Bad manners are considered habits:

  • speak loudly, not embarrassed in expressions;
  • swagger in gestures and behavior;
  • carelessness in clothes;
  • rudeness, manifested in outright hostility towards others;
  • inability to restrain one's irritation;
  • intentionally insulting the dignity of other people;
  • faux pas;
  • foul language;

"Nothing costs us so cheaply and is not valued so dearly as politeness." Every day we interact with a large number of people and politeness does not interfere with this. A successful person is polite in any situation.

And if you don't know what good manners are, that's cause for concern. But no matter how busy or burdened you are, you still need to remember good manners.

Good manners

  • do not show excessive curiosity;
  • give people appropriate compliments;
  • keep your word;
  • keep secrets;
  • do not raise your voice;
  • know how to apologize;
  • do not swear;
  • hold the door in front of people;
  • answer questions;
  • give thanks for what they do for you;
  • be hospitable;
  • follow the rules of etiquette
  • do not grab the last piece of cake;
  • saying goodbye to guests, escort them to the door;
  • be polite, courteous and kind;
  • don't get stuck in line.

Why good manners are needed (video)

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